Självporträtt med son

Påskharen har varit framme…

Och hela familjen…

Och belöning…

Feedback från Paul F. Gero (håller i kursen) 

Robert,
I especially love #3 and #5…they are great moments, really nice and interesting compositions and good use of bounce light…I might burn the corners down just a bit, but overall a good job of the coverage.

The first image is an interesting expression, though it shows something that happens when you shoot up with a wide angle lens: you might get some background items like the light fixture to contend with…

The light looks pretty hot from the upper right corner as well and also that happens when you include the bounce point in the wide shot.

The expression though is really interesting…

In this situation I might have bounced off the side wall, maybe even off the floor, or had the light angle up, perhaps even hard…edgy light but it often works in situations where there is a bit of an edge.

The limited contrast range of digital makes it tricky to burn down that upper right ceiling so it might be one way to avoid that by keeping the bounce source out of the frame.

I like the group shot though your son has a bit of a lazy eye expression looks like the shot was caught mid-blink…everyone else seems to be ready for the shot…you could always clone a frame of him that is where it should be expression=wise. While that wouldn't be okay for a newsphotographer (something like that has gotten people fired here) it's fine for a wedding/portrait shooter.

Good energy Robert, not a surprise there! And thanks for sharing!

Best,

Paul

Fin familj du har ,gillade alla bilderna å kan som vanligt inte ge någon vettig kritik annat än att dom var fina ,skulle var #1 och rörelseoskärpan kring munnen på din fru men den kanske du ville ha med då de ser ut som hon vill säga något

mvh/bjorsa

Tack bjorsa! Kul att du gillade bilderna, det värmer.

Jag träffar Paul om någon vecka. Och då ska jag klämma honom på fler idéer och tips. Förhoppningsvis så kan jag ta ett steg till i utvecklingen.

Hälsningar

Robert